Six word short stories and Sarsaparilla

hemingwayBack in the Sigla Magazine days, we had a section called ‘Flash Fiction’, that encouraged people to write a short story in 25 words. It was tricky enough to be economical with the words… or so we thought. Taking Hemingway’s famous six-word short story (”For sale: baby shoes, never worn”), Wired Magazine have asked a who’s who of fantasy, horror and sci-fi writers to come up with their own versions:

Harry Harrison: TIME MACHINE REACHES FUTURE!!! . nobody there .
Ursula K. Le Guin: Easy. Just touch the match to
Stan Lee: Automobile warranty expires. So does engine.
Joss Wheedon: Gown removed carelessly. Head, less so.
Margaret Atwood: Corpse parts missing. Doctor buys yacht.
Neil Gaiman: I’m dead. I’ve missed you. Kiss . ?
Frank Miller: With bloody hands, I say good-bye.
William Shatner: Failed SAT. Lost scholarship. Invented rocket.

A couple of weeks ago, I discovered the excellent Australian literary/culture blog Sarsaparilla, which is offering a prize for the best SWST they receive.

Can anyone do any better than the ones above?

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63 Responses to “Six word short stories and Sarsaparilla”

  1. Martin Says:

    Shatner’s sounds EXACTLY. Like HIM.

    Mine:

    Anger rising. Someone will die now…

  2. Sinead Says:

    Here’s my effort:
    Closing her eyes, she swallowed water.

  3. ro_G Says:

    shatner tops the list.

    btw, went to see Coraline (Neil Gaiman adaptation) by Púca Puppets last week. Great show. Will be touring shortly I believe.

    *ahem* my attempt:
    Clicked on link, reality flooded mystery.

  4. crocodile Says:

    ‘If only I could count’, thought David.

  5. Louisa Says:

    Neat idea!

    “I’m pregnant. Don’t call me again”.

  6. maca Says:

    “Be careful not to touch that…”

    “We’re the same. But you’re different.”

  7. Brian MCC Says:

    Hi! Why ? Lie! Cry.

  8. Keith Gaughan Says:

    My effort: All that’s been will be again!

  9. Keith Gaughan Says:

    With a (big) nod to Heinlein: Sex change; time machine; fuck self.

  10. Paul Says:

    Wake up hungover. Recall ex. Drink.

  11. Donagh Says:

    Here’s mine with influences attached:
    Mind drugs work, he rapidly thought
    Iain M. Banks
    Memory returned. Bullets shot through him
    Momento
    Graveside oration given by the murder
    Corrie

  12. dealga Says:

    Chicken came first. Then the egg.

  13. Duckie Says:

    Truman: Of course I knew, silly!

  14. fatmammycat Says:

    Feeling glum.
    New shoes.
    Immediate recovery.

  15. fatmammycat Says:

    Coppery smell.
    Guilty dog.
    Kicked arse.

  16. fatmammycat Says:

    Ringing phone.
    Number viewed.
    Mother ignored.

  17. Duckie Says:

    Antony to Cleopatra: Oh, I say!

  18. Duckie Says:

    Love hurts (so does colonic irrigation)

  19. Conan Drumm Says:

    Late Spring. Still cold, no leaves.

  20. ro_G Says:

    woke up in bath. kidney gone.

  21. ro_G Says:

    woke up this morning. liver gone.

    (but lambchop were worth it).

  22. Sinead Says:

    What can I say? Very impressed with these efforts. Can particularly related to Fatmammycat’s given that we’ve got a doggie visitor with a flatulence problem at the moment.

    Keep them coming…

  23. Duckie Says:

    Winter time, the living aint easy

  24. fatmammycat Says:

    Two hours
    to mole
    slice, worried.

  25. fatmammycat Says:

    Vodka mixed
    with gin,
    bad idea.

  26. Duckie Says:

    I thought you loved me? Oink

  27. Donagh Says:

    Avoid doing work. Write six words.

  28. Donagh Says:

    Christmas is coming. Pack your bags.

  29. Duckie Says:

    Halloween coming. Pretend I’m not in.

  30. Duckie Says:

    Trick or treat? Ask me bollo

  31. blankpaige Says:

    My tuppence worth …..

    Announced blog, commented liberally ; thought. Silence.

    M50, 5 series, nose-picker, Yuk!

  32. fatmammycat Says:

    Sick of doctors
    Stupid bloody idiots.

  33. Keith Gaughan Says:

    My fingers slipped… and then nothingness…

  34. Keith Gaughan Says:

    She turned and closed her eyes.

  35. Keith Gaughan Says:

    Cancer? But he was so healthy?

  36. Damien Mulley Says:

    Wanting. Finding. Shedding. Merging. Melting.
    Cigarette.

  37. Damien Mulley » Blog Archive » Hopefully I can finish what I had Says:

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  38. Mark Ward Says:

    Laurell K Hamilton: Some nifty plot… let’s have sex

  39. Mark Ward Says:

    oops, misread, thought it was about those authors….
    ah well

  40. matt Says:

    Great stuff…I blogged this yesterday and there’s a real meme about with flickr groups and everything :)

    She said “Yes�. I undressed quickly.

    “Checkmate�. Jesus looked forlorn. I laughed.

    Only six words to say everything?

    Sin in order to be forgiven.

    She was underage. So was I.

    Grave. Two men. Under and Over

    Her bum looked big in it.

    matt (lategaming, infurious, mac-sys)

  41. Bernie Goldbach Says:

    Feeling secure as an officeboy.

  42. maca Says:

    “I’m not in right now…” *click*

  43. fatmammycat Says:

    Chew gum
    your mouth
    open, die.

  44. Twenty Major Says:

    Six word story? Not nearly enough.

  45. georigasam Says:

    The sun rose in the west.

  46. Greg Finnegan Says:

    Love you forever. Don’t call me.

    When she’s grown, I’m outta here.

    Just cock the hammer, like this.

    Oops. Now the jet is inverted.

    Iraq to Korea? About 12 minutes.

    Don’t drink that … well, never mind.

    If you’re sick, use my purse.

  47. fatmammycat Says:

    oh, did
    you actually
    need that?

  48. Dotsy Says:

    ‘your personality replacement order was cancelled’

  49. Mr_T Says:

    These are my last words. Goodbye.

  50. Hugh Green Says:

    Banger up hole now lit. Goodbye spleen.

  51. Hugh Green Says:

    I wish I could count to six.

  52. Conan Drumm Says:

    Now you need to put all the six worders sequentially together to make a longer story!

  53. Will Says:

    Warning. Brain not found. Try coffee?

  54. Greg Finnegan Says:

    Sting ray? You’ve got to be…

    A collect call from the Pope.

    They sure don’t have a nuke.

    Nicest folks on earth, the French.

    Badges? Don’t need no stinkin’ badges!

    I’m gettin fond of that bitch.

    Read my lips: No new taxes.

    I took initiative,inventing the Internet.

    I didn’t live in this century.

    Well, I am not a crook.

    Everybody is ignorant on different subjects.

    Nothing to fear but fear itself.

    Marijuana? Once. I did not inhale.

  55. copernicus Says:

    Hugh, as an editor -

    Lit banger up hole. Goodbye spleen.

    Isn’t this basically an exercise in what movie tag-line creators do?

    Just saw The Departed, for example -

    Mad Micks make Marky Mark’s Day.

  56. Liam Mulkeen Says:

    Aye, and there it was; Gone!

  57. Liam Mulkeen Says:

    Dead eyes stared from her photograph.

  58. Liam Mulkeen Says:

    “The Sun’s not yellow; it’s chicken” - Bob Dylan’ish

  59. Oli Mistry Says:

    News: Bin Laden Found in Bush

  60. Hugh Green Says:

    Thank you for the editing, copernicus. I should get extra marks, I think, for prescience:

    http://news.bbc.co.uk/1/hi/england/wear/6132140.stm

  61. anon Says:

    Someone’s imitating you. Flattered?

    http://reallynotmuch.blogspot.com/2007/01/six-word-short-story.html

  62. Sinead Says:

    Thanks Anon, that’s a bit disappointing. By all means use the idea, but using my exact words? Hmmm…

  63. Brendan Says:

    The whole thing sucks btw:

    Here’s a story inspired by the whole incident (all my own work, I promise! Are titles allowed? Do they count? ‘Stripped’ describes the feeling I had when somebody conned me via plagiarism when I was a tutor in UCD):

    STRIPPED

    Honest, I was robbed. Sad now.

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